=Out-Of-Spite

Truth

Long Day

Wed Apr 2, 2008, 8:26 AM

Mood: Sociable
Listening to: wheels of time turning
Reading: classified information
Watching: life pass before my eyes
Playing: in traffic
Eating: rocks
Drinking: Strawberry Breeze juice

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First of all I just gotta say...

Oh nevermind.

I'm done with that.

Ok, well, there's a Humble War between

and

Go and shower love on both!

As for everything else...

Well, I've been writing a lot. I feel sorta bad because I haven't posted my story in a while. I'm still writing it... I don't know why I'm not posting it.

I guess it's just that I feel like it's dragging in the middle a bit and I don't want to add until I get to the exciting points. But, that doesn't work because then you don't know the events leading to it.

*Sigh*

I guess it'll be my side project until it's finished and I can send copies to companies so I can try to get it published.

I don't know.

Anyways, I'm still writing poems. It's hard to switch back and forth between poems and my story.

I've also noticed my writing style (for my poems) has changed so much! I wish I could find my poems from 8th grade, when I first started writing.

When I discovered my abilites to express myself through this artform.

There's just one I want to find, but I think it's been destroyed, thrown away. An exercise in which we had to use the 5 senses (smell, touch, sight, sound and feel) and write a poem where we never told the reader exactly where we were. From the descriptions we gave, our classmates had to guess.

I wrote mine about a ski lounge.

I've never been to one, but everyone that had said it was perfect. To have so much praise from one of my first pieces, THAT was my true inspiration to be what I am today.

I just wish I could share it with you all.

To all my DA friends and my roommates ~~>

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~loudwisdom

Apr 2, 2008, 9:34:51 AM

OOO your going down or up im not sure which but i cannot take that sitting down ^-^

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Everyone feels a certain way for a reason, when you read a persons poem your glimpsing at their very soul.

=Out-Of-Spite

Apr 2, 2008, 9:51:03 AM

lol then stand up! (or lay down) however you have to be to take it!

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~

Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from

Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]

~loudwisdom

Apr 2, 2008, 9:53:41 AM

lol

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Everyone feels a certain way for a reason, when you read a persons poem your glimpsing at their very soul.

=Out-Of-Spite

Apr 2, 2008, 9:59:10 AM

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~

Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from

Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]

~silver-35-oasis

Apr 2, 2008, 5:46:08 PM

so, write another poem using your senses and make us guess where you are.

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Joey

"Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality."
-Edgar Allan Poe

:click here ---> [link]

=Out-Of-Spite

Apr 3, 2008, 7:05:12 AM

OMG! Where have you been???! lol Well, I read this comment last night but didn't have time to respond. I wrote one per your suggestion... but I don't think it's all that great.

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~

Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from

Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]

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Journal History

Jul 1, 2009 I'm a PUMA dammitt!! (+New Feature!!)
Jun 17, 2009 MMM That's the fresh scent of a clean inbox!
Jun 10, 2009 New Random Deviant And Updates
May 27, 2009 Surprise!!!
May 11, 2009 A Day for Moms and (temporary) Goodbyes
May 7, 2009 Moving On
May 6, 2009 I have snapped
May 4, 2009 Breaking through the ice and gasping for air
Apr 28, 2009 You've got 3 Days
Apr 23, 2009 (2) I *think* I've figured it all out....

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2.) I WILL give critique, both good and bad, including corrections on spelling/grammar. If you're expecting only sugary-niceness to pour from my hands, you are greatly mistaken. I am here to HELP, not cater to your ego. In other words, if you aren't looking for critique to help improve your writing then I'm the wrong person to watch you

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4.) I *might* not watch you back if you watch me. This is due to the sudden influx of watchers to my account. I'm only one person and messages/deviations are constant! Anyone I do not watch back will most likely be the ones who do not post often, but if you have something you want me to critique and I do not watch you, feel free to note me a link and I will help! (Note***people who do not post often does NOT include close friends/oldest dA friends)

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Shoutbox

=Out-Of-Spite: well it's a good thing I stopped him cause I'm lactose intolerant!!
Tue Apr 7, 2009, 7:13 AM
~Heaven-Rose: Aww he had whipped cream in there for you!
Mon Mar 30, 2009, 7:52 AM
=Out-Of-Spite: as long as he doesn't actually spray anything with his hose then I'll be fine!
Mon Mar 30, 2009, 7:19 AM
~Heaven-Rose: Maybe he'll do the firehouse thrust for you. My goodness that thought is making me nauseous.. um.. nauseous with lustful thoughts and... ugh...
Tue Mar 17, 2009, 11:31 AM
=Out-Of-Spite: I'd only want to see his fat jiggle-dance! For some reason, that's the funniest thing in the world
Tue Mar 17, 2009, 7:38 AM
~Heaven-Rose: Whatever! you know you like those party strippers big n' juicy! Put out my fire baybay!
Wed Mar 11, 2009, 4:37 PM
=Out-Of-Spite: EWWW!!! Oh god, girl if the 500lb guy doesn't have a heartattack - I WILL!!
Wed Mar 11, 2009, 7:54 AM
~Heaven-Rose: Gonna have a bachelorette party?? I'll call the 500 pound fireman!!
Fri Mar 6, 2009, 10:59 AM
=Out-Of-Spite: Thu Mar 5, 2009, 7:58 AM
=Panda-Vision: Tue Feb 24, 2009, 12:14 PM
~Heaven-Rose: Have some looooove!
Sat Feb 21, 2009, 12:11 AM
*IrrevocableFate: Thu Feb 5, 2009, 10:20 PM
~Heaven-Rose: Nanner nanner boo boo.
Thu Jan 29, 2009, 10:30 AM
=Out-Of-Spite: man, I wish you could get messages in your centre when someone writes on your shoutbox! I mean, I over-look this thing otherwise
Tue Jan 27, 2009, 8:06 AM
=Out-Of-Spite: man, I wish you could get messages in your centre when someone writes on your shoutbox! I mean, I over-look this thing otherwise
Tue Jan 27, 2009, 8:06 AM
~Heaven-Rose: made your shout box smelly to say I care!
Wed Jan 7, 2009, 3:57 PM
=xxpainedXbeautyxx: lalalala I'm writing something random cuz I don't see anything recently! LOL
Sat Jan 3, 2009, 9:09 AM
=Out-Of-Spite: Merry Christmas!!
Wed Dec 24, 2008, 8:30 AM
=Panda-Vision: Your shoutbox looks all empty! =O -spam spam spam, bulking out with something useless-
Tue Dec 23, 2008, 3:29 PM
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