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The Chosen - Chapter 2 by =Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite:



Alrianna pushed her shoulder against the door and turned the knob. With the heat from inside, the wood has swollen and the door was stuck again. She re-gathered her strength and tried again. It still wouldn’t budge. So, she bared her weight down, lowering her center of gravity, and connected her should with a powerful thud. She heard some scraping sounds as the door finally gave way and she fell to the floor.

Alrianna looked up and saw that her apartment was filled with boxes. She opened one and it had all of her sweaters and shirts in it. Unsure how to think, she crawled inside and sat with her back against the door in silence.

Her mom walked out of a bedroom and into the front room. Alrianna looked up at her with a puzzled face.

Her mother had been crying.

With a tear-filled voice, her mom approached her.

“Al,” she said, “I’m sure you must be wondering what’s going on.”

“Mom, what’s wrong? Are you ok?”

“This is hard to say, but we’re moving. Your grandmother passed away last night and left us her house and property.”

Alrianna realized her mom was smiling through her tears.

“What are you talking about?” Alrianna said as she tried to stand up.

“Well, dear,” her mother replied, “your grandmother was a very wealthy woman. I’ve inherited quite a bit of land and all of her remaining money. So, when we move, I won’t have to work anymore. Isn’t that great?!”
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This is about the point last night that I finally figured out how I'm going to get where I'm going. It's actually going pretty well.

If you can't tell, these "chapters" are more like pages. However, because of DAs restictions on how long a deviation can be I can't make the chapters as long as I want. So, think of this whole thing as a really short book.

Maybe one day I'll actually make this a book. When/if I do, I'll be sure to make it longer with more details.

There's still quite a few more "chapters" before we get to the fantasy part. Hope you guys enjoy it! (oh and for the category, I want to wait until this is completed before I pick one for real. We'll just have to see where it goes and how it gets there!)

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Hey there, sorry it took so long to comment! I just got through reading this, kind of came as a quick surprise, I was thinking, what could be blocking the door? Very cool! Time to move onto the next section.
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Sounds like a new location coming up, maybe a big house of some kind

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very. it's going to get very interesting soon!

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lol :D Glad to keep you guessing.

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