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S.4 Creating Your Ghost by =Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Haiku & Eastern


  Dreaming ghosts of you.
  The memory of your lips
Makes me catch my breath.
©2008-2010 =Out-Of-Spite
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September Prompt # 4 : Haunting

I came up with quite a few lines to go in this haiku:
drifting on the wind
the memory of your kiss
carressing my lips
creating your ghost

I used the last one as the title and combined 2 of those lines to create one good one for the middle.

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~krull10 Sep 4, 2008, 11:15:41 AM
mmm i love this darling :)

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Mood: Love =Jazzman1989 Sep 4, 2008, 11:32:11 AM
Sends chills down my spine :giggle:

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=Out-Of-Spite Sep 4, 2008, 12:43:29 PM
Then it worked it's magic :D
:hug:

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=Out-Of-Spite Sep 4, 2008, 12:46:17 PM
:) thank you and thanks for your fav dear!

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
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=Jazzman1989 Sep 4, 2008, 1:43:12 PM
:blushes:

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:

*Wonderful-World <--- Wonderful*World :dance:
*Inked-Page <---- Inked-page :dance:
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Mood: Love ~Satyesu Sep 4, 2008, 4:43:35 PM
Evocative and beautiful. Thanks a lot for writing and sharing.

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~krull10 Sep 5, 2008, 3:42:39 AM
you're welcome love :) thanks for being YOu :hug:

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To know oneself, one should assert oneself. Psychology is action, not thinking about oneself. We continue to shape our personality all our life. If we knew ourselves perfectly, we should die. ~ Albert Camus, 1913-1960
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=Out-Of-Spite Sep 5, 2008, 6:23:52 AM
Thank you and thank you so much for the fav!

--
~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
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=Out-Of-Spite Sep 5, 2008, 6:30:09 AM
:hug:
lol it's all I could ever be!

--
~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
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