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Falter

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Suspended
Struggling in quicksand,
Swimming in an hourglass
As the grains filter through;
Measuring the movement
Of TIme as it passes us by.


Am I large enough
To block the hole
And resist the passage
And the restraints Time controls;
Or will I sift through with the rest,
Another life without impact?


Am I light enough
To be the last to pass, the last to fall,
The first to be remembered;
Or is the weight of my stone heart
Enough to pull me down
And bury me quickly?


Will I be
All I hope to achieve,
Stamping my impact
In stone monuments
For all to see;
Or will I forever Falter
And sink to the bottom of the sea?
Just some thoughts on time and it's passage. Whether or not I have enough time to fulfill all of my goals or if I'm just kidding myself. setting my goals too high and setting myself up for disappointment I need to re-evaluate my life and be more realistic I guess.

The last line refers to my stone heart and myself being sand, since both sink.

We are all just moments in Time
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krull10's avatar
Wow! I love this! You can feel the existential angst, a desire to make your impression, your lasting significance in this world. I have a very similar themed one I need to send you :)
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ok, I am officially your #1 fan