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Suspended
Struggling in quicksand,
Swimming in an hourglass
As the grains filter through;
Measuring the movement
Of TIme as it passes us by.
Am I large enough
To block the hole
And resist the passage
And the restraints Time controls;
Or will I sift through with the rest,
Another life without impact?
Am I light enough
To be the last to pass, the last to fall,
The first to be remembered;
Or is the weight of my stone heart
Enough to pull me down
And bury me quickly?
Will I be
All I hope to achieve,
Stamping my impact
In stone monuments
For all to see;
Or will I forever Falter
And sink to the bottom of the sea?
Struggling in quicksand,
Swimming in an hourglass
As the grains filter through;
Measuring the movement
Of TIme as it passes us by.
Am I large enough
To block the hole
And resist the passage
And the restraints Time controls;
Or will I sift through with the rest,
Another life without impact?
Am I light enough
To be the last to pass, the last to fall,
The first to be remembered;
Or is the weight of my stone heart
Enough to pull me down
And bury me quickly?
Will I be
All I hope to achieve,
Stamping my impact
In stone monuments
For all to see;
Or will I forever Falter
And sink to the bottom of the sea?
Just some thoughts on time and it's passage. Whether or not I have enough time to fulfill all of my goals or if I'm just kidding myself. setting my goals too high and setting myself up for disappointment I need to re-evaluate my life and be more realistic I guess.
The last line refers to my stone heart and myself being sand, since both sink.
We are all just moments in Time
The last line refers to my stone heart and myself being sand, since both sink.
We are all just moments in Time
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Wow! I love this! You can feel the existential angst, a desire to make your impression, your lasting significance in this world. I have a very similar themed one I need to send you
ok, I am officially your #1 fan
ok, I am officially your #1 fan