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Come Home by =Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Open


You're so coy and surprising
The feelings inside my heart are rising.
How am I suppose to get over you,
When everytime we talk I sense you want me too?
You know how I still feel.
You know pretending isn't real.
I've told you every chance I've had.
Could loving me back really be so bad?
I just want you to tell me
"Come home. Come back to me."
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Another old poem, from before I moved home.

Past hopes.
Past desires.
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*riencuran:iconriencuran: Apr 9, 2008, 8:27:22 PM
again, so familiar....

You are wonderful at capturing such heartfelt emotions, even in a brief amount of lines.

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A purpose of human life, no matter who is controlling it, is to love whoever is around to be loved.
-Kurt Vonnegut
=Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite: Apr 10, 2008, 6:32:19 AM
Thank you :hug: It's always great to hear such praise. Makes me want to writing!

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