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20 Never Stops Blowing Up by =Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite:



All these papers flutter around me like a breeze kicked up while i'm outside
reading and i see my past slowly landing on the ground page by page until there
are no blank spots to be found

Soft white snow littering the grass with words i never meant to say but i still meant to think and thought at times when everything was crashing all around

My work my passion my only way to sort out all of the feelings i've felt like love and
doubt and the constant desire to better myself for the sake of others because that was the only reason that made it all count

I'll watch as each word plants a seed in these fertile minds spreads root and florishes like weeds made of rhymes and all the while it will prove to me that my life had some meaning though not in my short span of time

All the while i'll know it wasn't really me that made your hearts and minds race to take a chance to express all the hidden chests of gold only you know how to mold into words that will pass like a torch with a touch of kerosine

You'll form the lines and shape more minds bringing on generations to come when thoughts are not enough and the world has come undone around you and know as you do that

You were already as strong as you've become and you had that potential all along.
©2008-2010 =Out-Of-Spite
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June Prompt #20 : Wind

I was sitting out on the balcony at lunch a few minutes ago and got the first couple of lines for this. I decided that, after I was done writing, it needed to be one of the ones in the new style. If you guys want, I can fix it to where there are line breaks and such. Just say the word.

The wind blows strong and free, like the words that flow through my fingertips and change the course of time; the way people think.

One day, I will be a teacher and I hope that I take all I have learned and pass it on to others. I will be the wind of change. I will blow wildly, inspiring any and all I can

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:iconpardonm3:
It's like each stanza is a breath of wind...

All these papers flutter around me like a breeze

Soft white snow littering the grass with words i never meant to say

I'll watch as each word plants a seed in these fertile minds

You'll form the lines and shape more minds


Good stuff.
:iconout-of-spite:
thank you :)

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
:iconout-of-spite:
Thanks! Glad you like it and half of those lines I added in when I was typing it out. My mind thought I wrote them before but when I looked at the paper they weren't there!

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
:iconmatahari7:
i think it looks great this way :D that a very good piece!

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"Crystallized, as I lay here and rest
Eyes of glass stare directly at death
From deep sleep I have broken away
No one knows, no one hears what I say"
:iconskerd22:
You are pretty fantastic at this prompt thing, verily.
:iconout-of-spite:
:) Thank you

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]

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